This week I’ve posted another short passage from the upcoming full length D/s novel The Change. We peek in on Kirsten and Kiehl, a little glimpse into a scene in a serious D/s marriage …
Warning — a touch of cruelty ahead…
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“That’s enough dear,” he said, patting her hip. “You don’t want to upset my aim do you?”
She wanted nothing else but to do just that, but she knew better. “Yes Kie—Sir. I’m sorry.”
Her breasts throbbed insistently underneath her, their heavy curves pressed firmly into the bed. He had considerately laid a thick terry cloth bath towel on the mattress before cuffing her wrists behind her back and ordering her over for her visit with the cane.
Kirsten wanted to believe the gesture was for her comfort, but she suspected it was merely to keep her from staining the expensive sheets.
Her swollen breasts were the reason why the cane was currently slicing into her vulnerable cheeks in the first place.
It had all started when she decided to call him at the office…
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Best,
Trent
“… visit with the cane.” Whoa. Can’t wait to see this novel released … 🙂
I just realized that it’s been the cane two weeks in a row! Perhaps next week I’ll mix it up some…
Or not:)
Whoa, the cane!
I have always wanted to try out the cane, Trent. For research purposes, obviously 🙂
Great excerpt, Trent!
Can’t wait to read more next week!
Thanks Katherine. Glad you liked. The cane definitely … focuses the attention:)
Her poor boobies. Her poor bum!!
What the hell did she say in that call?!?!
OMG, what did HE say?!?
SatSpanks is too short. Oh, yes, *I* said it…
I can’t give away much other than to say … he was (sort of) mean, and that turned her on.
And it’s safe to say she gets spanked/caned/whatevered a lot more too!
I know this is the wrong thing to say but I can’t help but laugh at the towel being there to protect the sheets. Sorry!
Apart from that- very hot snip… I love the cane
And this is definitely going on my the list as soon as its released
TBR list not the list … Damn autocorrect
No need to apologize; the statement is supposed to be a humorous/wry observation on Kirsten’s part. I thought it was funny too:)
You do this sooooooo well, Trent. And you can just keep using the cane. I have a mental image…
Glad to hear this… because there can always be more cane
I enjoy the turn of the phrase “visit with the cane,” as it sets the proper image in my mind. This is a wonderful snippet … teasing and delightful.
Thank you, Alice. I think you write great stuff, so this is high praise from you:)
What a hook at the end! And I love the phrase, a visit with the cane.
Thanks for checking it out, Cara:)
Not enough, I really want more! Snippets are like trying to eat one chip. I’m looking forward to much more.
Oh I’d give you more than 8 sentences (I’m a “giver”), but then I’d get my name put up on the demerit board.
That would be … awkward:)
Wow Trent! Hot stuff you got there! I will definitely be back next week!
Thank you, Dinah! I hope I can make next week’s satisfactory too 🙂
Cane…yikes! Yes, throw off his aim.
Hehe. I like the way you think, Starla. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Love that her wrists are cuffed. Yum!
Is it necessary to cuff the obedient wife’s wrists during her caning? Nope.
Does it make it even hotter when her wrists are cuffed? That’s a hell yes.
(Thanks for stopping by!)
Not enough and what did she say exactly…hmmm. And swollen breasts…Hmmm makes me want to know more.
It’s like a micro-cliffhanger.
Cliffhangers are mean …
(If you scroll down to Renee’s comment, there’s a hint about the swollen breasts:)
Very hot. Definitely piques the button of curiosity.
Good, then it’s working! :::rubs hands together:::
Thanks for reading and commenting, Daizie:)
The hook at the end caught me for sure. Great job!
Thank you, Celeste. I picked up Underwear Probation recently, and it’s on my soon to be read list. Looks hot! Love the premise:)
I definitely want to read more!
Thank you, Constance. More next week!
Wait… is she lactating? Post pregnancy? Fear, like arousal always made my milk let down…
I thought you might pick up this, Renee:) I don’t want give everything away though….
Her swollen breasts were the reason for her visit with the cane… oh my.. if that doesn’t make a girl wonder.
Nice snippet, Trent.
Glad you liked it, LA. Thanks for dropping by:)
I have to know what that call was all about to bring on this punishment;)
Keep reading future installments, and there might be clues
(There’s a chance I might serialize this novel on my blog before I publish it — haven’t made up my mind on that yet — so if I do, you’ll be able to get the full skinny. Stay tuned:)
Wow, Trent. So glad you’re bringing the BDSM!
Thanks, Emily:) I’m just glad I’m not scaring people off! My stuff tends to run rather … intense.
Irony… A visit is usually a pleasant, innocuous thing. Not how you do it Trent Lets hope she learns and her visitations are more pleasant in the future, unless she enjoys such a thing. Yikes!
This depends on how you’d define “enjoy”, Maddie:) It’s complicated for Kirsten, that’s for sure.
I do appreciate cruel irony though … but then again, I do have a sadistic streak about a mile wide…
Oh God! I can’t wait for this one to be published, I’m going to have to buy something else of yours while I wait… you better hurry up, I want more of this one!
Aw shoot, thanks Abbie! :::Trent kicks rocks:::
I’m in the middle of A Little Training. Man, that is a hot little book…
I must know more. Swollen breasts…cane…what the?
More tomorrow:) But I can’t promise it won’t just pose more questions…
Thanks for reading/commenting.
Okay, when does this book come out? I have got to read this! I don’t know what to feel more sorry for: her boobs or her butt! The cane? Ouch!
Hi Maren!
Thank you for stopping by. I love your stuff:) The book should be out end of November if the schedule holds…
love it!
Thanks, Joelle;)