I asked my friend and fellow RTK poster Natasha Knight if there was room for one more post on the weekly Saturday Spankings Bloghop. Fortunately, she very kindly allowed me in despite the late hour:)
The snippet is from a work in progress — about 75% complete — with the working title of The Change (I’m probably going to change it before publication, but it works for now). This is a return to spanking/DD oriented erotica for me, and it follows the story of a couple just beginning to explore spanking and D/s — and discovering that their desires run much deeper than either of them suspected.
As so often happens in real life, things get much more complicated when the heroine Kirsten becomes pregnant! Both Kirsten, and her husband Kiehl, wonder if they’ll have to postpone their exploration of their desires since a baby is on the way. Soon though it becomes clear that, rather than putting the brakes on the exploration of their desires, her pregnancy unexpectedly adds more fuel to the fire of their lust — and their love.
Snippet:
THWICK!
God, he wasn’t warming up this time! Not that she was surprised. Gentle and merciful were not qualities she’d usually ascribe to her beloved husband. But this is what they’d both agreed she needed.
“I’m waiting, Kirsten.” His voice was a soft rumble behind her.
“One, sir,” she said, gasping as the stroke bloomed fire across her bottom.
“Good girl.” He tapped the cane lower, directly across the tender junction of her thighs and buttocks. She hated the cane there, which was precisely why he liked it there. “Now, more quickly this time, or we’ll need to repeat the stroke.”
So reasonable, so matter of fact.
Ruthless.
The Change, a full-length novel (approx 70K words) of pleasure, pain — and pregnancy, is scheduled for release in November 2013 at all major e-book retailers. I hope you enjoyed this little glimpse into Kirsten and Kiehl’s bedroom.
Please make sure to visit all the other participants in this week’s hop. My LORD, there are some hot scenes this week!
Best,
Trent
You finally joined us! Welcome to Saturday Spankings!! Hot snippet– I’m excited for this one…I find pregnancy hot, too. 🙂
Thanks Renee:) Took me way too long, but better late than never (I hope). I can’t wait to finish this one up. It’s been practically begging me to finish it for, oh, the last 6 months!
Oh my, Kiehl does indeed sound Ruthless. And with a cane too.
This sounds like it’s going to be a very intimate and loving story. It’s going to be interesting finding out just how deeply the go in their explorations.
Welcome to SatSpanks, Trent. I really enjoyed your snippet… ~oh boy, a cane… has me holding my cheeks already~
Ha! Yes, he’s … strict, definitely:) Thanks for reading and commenting!
Trent you need some little share buttons here… 🙂
I was JUST thinking that too. I knew I’d left something out! Thanks for the reminder:)
Oh, this sounds fantastic! What a great setup, and what a lovely way to craft your scene. I’ll be looking forward to the final story.
Thank you, Anastasia:) Glad you liked!
Ruthless indeed!Those damn pregnancy hormones certainly can fire things up Hot snip. I look forward to more if this.
Welcome to Sat spanks
They sure can:) Thank you for the comment and the welcome, Tara.
Congratulations on your first Sat Spankings, Trent!!
What a way to start!
I have a soft spot for DD books, and I cannot wait to read this!
I loved his authority, and firm touch coupled with his loving words.
“Good girl” always makes me melt 🙂
Great job!
I think “authority and firm touch coupled with love” perfectly encapsulates how I try to write. I don’t always succeed, but that’s the goal anyway!
Thanks for reading and commenting, Katherine:)
I’m not a cane fan in anyway, when it comes to real life, in a well written story like this – I love it. I know you’re excited about Nov. I’m looking forward to reading more.
Thanks PK:) Yep, the cane is rather fearsome IRL (and in fiction, for that matter).I hope you enjoy the book when it finally get’s released.
God, that’s hot. I love him making her count. I love him not letting her off the hook. The tapping, yum…Yum Yum Yum. Can’t wait for the release.
And it’s about time you joined in on Saturdays!
So glad you liked it, Natasha. I’ve got plenty more snippets from this one I can post for future SatSpanks too:)
I know — you and Renee have been (gently) reminding me for months. I’m glad I finally listened to you — it’s been really fun!
What we agreed that I needed..loved that. Great snippet. 😉
Thanks, Suzy! Yep, I’m with you — the idea of a couple agreeing that she needs his strict discipline? HOT. I hope I can do it justice in the book. We shall see…
Nothing like the cane, is there? Wonderful snippet–and great to see you here, Trent!
Hi Emily, great to be here! Thanks for the welcome and the kind words:)
Great snippet! I’m a BIG fan of both caning and counting strokes. Can’t wait to read more!
Well, I think you may be in luck as I have quite a bit more I can share from the story. Glad you liked!
Welcome to SatSpanks Trent. What a wonderful first contribution. Counting cane strokes is not only ruthless, its diabolical. But I love it. Nice job.
I know, right? It dances right on that thin line between strict and… mean. But I suppose that’s part of the appeal. Thanks for the kind words, Maddie.
Welcome to Saturday Spankings, Trent. I love DD stories, and this one looks like it’s going to be incredibly intense. I greatly look forward to reading more. DD is probably my favorite type of spanking novel. Well done!
Thank you for the warm welcome, Kathryn. My books all seem to skew toward intense (maybe too much for some readers), so I hope I can get this one just right!
Nicely written. Enjoyed your description of the caning.
Thank you, Cara:)
I’m looking forward to seeing the snippets from Breeder too!
Welcome! Can’t wait to read more from you- more snippets and when this book releases.
Thank you, Joelle! Very glad you liked.
Hi Trent welcome and great snippet. I love DD stories and I can’t wait to read more of this one 🙂
Thank you for the welcome, Constance! Yep, more next week:)
Welcome to the weekly spanking…hop. Great start! Looks like we can expect fun things from you. DD is my favorite, so you can bet I’ll be back for your next snippet.
Thanks, Patricia. Hopefully, I haven’t set the bar too high for myself. We’ll see next week, I guess!
Oh I like this! I’m glad you joined… now get busy. 😉
How long until it is available???
Hehe, thanks, Abbie:) I’m definitely busy on it.
As for how long until it’s available, I’m still weighing options. The tentative release date is Nov 30 2013 for the full novel.
However, there is an outside chance I may serialize it on this blog first. I’m wrapping up a serialization for another novel of mine over on Romancing The Kink, and it’s been such fun that I’m seriously considering doing it again. Not sure yet though …
Welcome to Saturday Spankings, Trent! Loved this scene. Hope the book is available soon!
Hi Sue! Thanks for reading and commenting (I love your work, BTW). I’m shooting for a Nov release date — hoping for sooner, but that’s what it’s looking like right now…