Hello all,
This week, I’m continuing with another short snippet from the upcoming full length D/s novel, The Change.
Kirsten, knowing that another session of “The Game” is slated for tonight, arrives back home to a darkened, seemingly empty house … only to find it’s not so empty after all.
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She felt him watching her. She liked it, this new side to Kiehl. She moved toward the kitchen, guessing he must be hiding on the other side of the wall.
“Stay there. Don’t move until I tell you to.”
Her pussy spasmed at his voice. It was the voice she only heard in the depths of passion, the voice she felt wash over her in the heated darkness of their bedroom as they made love.
“Oh … okay.” She didn’t know what to do with her hands, so she crossed her arms over her chest.
“Don’t do that. Drop your arms.”
“Why?” Kiehl where are you? What’s going on?”
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I would’ve posted more, but the Sat Spanks rules are rather … strict:)
Please make sure you click on the links below to visit all the other great entries in this week’s hop! Until next week!
Trent
Subs covering things, or trying to, in BDSM erotica? Hmm. No, not gonna work. I think it’s against the basic D/s rules. Good suspense in this SNIPPET. Yes I’m still on this weird kick of capitalizing SNIPPET. No one knows when I’ll stop. After everyone on the internet is thoroughly annoyed, maybe.
She definitely knows better:) She’s either forgetful or defiant — or maybe she’s both? Either way, she won’t be let off …
Unseen and giving orders. I like that. It adds to the tension of the scene. Very good, and you know that I want more!
Thanks, Alice:) Lots more to come…
He is certainly exerting control over her by forbidding her to cross her arms. Nice reveal of the dynamic.
He’s … particular, in his requirements. Thank you for reading, Cara.
I do like the voice coming out of the darkness. Hot! I’ll be back.
Thanks for stopping by, PK! There’s a lot more to come.
What I love about this: her obvious inexperience, her apprehension so clearly felt by the reader, her sense of “okaaay…. soooo…” 🙂 It’s really quiet wonderful.
Oh, thank you, Maggie! Very nice of you. Hopefully, the next few snippets will flesh things out a bit more — or maybe just add more mystery:)
Oh I like this. Nice spin on sensory deprivation. Love it when a girl just doesn’t quite know what’s going on.
Great build of anticipation, Trent!.
Thanks, LA. Zis is only zee beginnink (where did the sudden German accent come from, Trent??)
The voice she only heard in the depths of passion… Yum! I always save yours for last Trent, I love reading from a mans perspective. Very sexy snippet!
Aww, Maddie, that’s so sweet:) I always wonder if readers really do want to hear the man’s perspective as much. Glad to hear that at least some readers do!
Ok that wasnt quite enough for me. lol I need to know more.
Ha! Believe me, keeping these to 8 sentences (or so) is torture for me.
My stuff is not known for being … concise (read: Trent is an effing windbag).
Thanks for reading:)
See how much you can do with just eight sentences? Yum.
Thanks, Emily. I found myself yelling: “God, this is so HARD! There’s a lot more here, I swear!”
Yes, I know — I’m weird.
Darn that sentence limit. Sounds yummy, I want more!
You’re tellin’ me, Normandie! Glad you liked it though:)
I can almost hear the authority in that voice. Nice snippet!!
Thanks for commenting, Mary. More Kiehl-in-the-darkness next week:)
Ah…do you have to be such a rule follower, Trent? I would like to read more…
Oh, I broke the rules last week. Got sore knuckles from Ms.Blake’s ruler for it.
Totally worth it though:)
(Much more to come in subsequent weeks — thanks for reading!)
Nice, I like the tingly anticipation.
Damn the rules… I want more- game? What game? We need more!
Mmmm, so sexy, Trent!
I love Hide and Spank, um, Seek. 🙂
I loved her anticipation, and her authority!
Very nice!
🙂
yum inducing… she’s obviously still learning 😀 I love Kiehl’s voice coming out of the darkness, and her thoughts on his voice
mmm, loved the description of how she felt about his voice… yum
Ugh. I’m dying to know more. I’ll definitely check it out this Saturday. Great snippet!