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Saturday Spankings — 04/26/14

April 25, 2014 By Trent Evans

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Hello Spankos,

I’m continuing with with more from the upcoming full-length D/s novel “The Change”.

Kiehl is watching, shocked, as his friend Tom demonstrates his caning technique … on his own wife.

Yes, Kiehl knows this is wrong. But if loving this is wrong, Kiehl doesn’t want to be right… (+100 pts for anyone who can name the 80’s Eddie Murphy comedy that’s paraphrased from)

* * * *

The cane tapped again, lower this time, across the tender junction of thigh and buttock. Sharon jerked as the rattan snapped in once more.

“Felt that one,” Tom murmured. “Stay still now.”

Sharon froze as the third stroke landed, harder this time, lacing a rapidly pinkening line of hurt between the first two. The earlier strokes had left swollen tramlines, no doubt throbbing and painful, crossing the breadth of Sharon’s round bottom.

Kiehl was amazed that such a slight instrument, wielded so lightly, was capable of causing such a reaction in the prostrate woman.

The next stroke was laid across the upper thighs, and Sharon cried out, her voice jarringly loud in the quiet room. Tom lowered the cane and fingered the weals, running a fingertip along the most swollen tramline. “Very nice. You should feel these for a few days, dear.”

“Yes, Sir,” Sharon said, voice quavering.

* * * *

I hope you liked this week’s installment! Wow, this week’s was … rather mean. To the shock of absolutely nobody, I wasn’t quite able to keep it at eight lines.

Before you go, please take some time to visit the other stops in this week’s hop. More hotness just waiting to be perused. Enjoy!

More to come next week:)

Trent

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Filed Under: Saturday Spankings Tagged With: BDSM erotic romance, Caning, corporal punishment, D/s marriage, domestic discipline, Dominance and submission, excerpt, forced exhibitionism, Master/slave, Saturday Spankings Blog Hop, The Change

About Trent Evans

Trent Evans is an independent author of BDSM erotic romance and erotica. Putting pen to paper since he was a wee lad, he decided to try to share some of the tales cooked up in his fevered imagination. Some readers might not be horrified. He tries to write stories that appeal to both women and men (wow, threading the needle), but will follow wherever the story takes him.

A long-time resident of the Pacific Northwest, the author believes that the high percentage of authors in the region (compared to the nation as a whole) is chiefly due to the fact that it’s so damned wet and miserable all the time there. They tend to use their long hours cooped up inside making up stories that depict things they’ll never see or experience – such as sunshine.

Comments

  1. Maggie Carpenter says

    April 25, 2014 at 9:29 pm

    “lacing a rapidly pinkening line of hurt between the first two.”

    Delish!!!

    • Trent Evans says

      May 5, 2014 at 7:24 pm

      Aww, thanks, Maggie!

  2. Christina Mandara says

    April 26, 2014 at 1:10 am

    OOh! Upper thighs, ow ow ow. I love the cane… for such a slim instrument of torture, when wielded correctly it can do some serious damage. Oh and LOVED ‘swollen tramlines’ beautiful imagery Trent, as normal 🙂

    • Trent Evans says

      May 5, 2014 at 7:26 pm

      Upper thighs just kill. I’ve never been caned there (I’m a giver, heh), but I can just tell it would be agony.

      Thanks for the kind words, on the imagery:)

  3. Maddie Taylor says

    April 26, 2014 at 5:37 am

    I believe is was the good Rev. Brown in Coming to America that said, If lovin’ the lord is wrong, I don’t want to be right. He also said, “He helped Joshua fight the battle of Jericho, he helped Daniel get out the lion’s den, he helped Gilligan get off the island.”

    LOL! But I digress. Poor naive Kiehl. If you can’t cane your wife? Who can you cane?

    • Trent Evans says

      May 5, 2014 at 7:31 pm

      Maddie WINS! I forgot about the Gilligan line too. Awesome! Every time I see that movie, I just cackle. The scene where Eddie Murphy is crooning in the street late at night still makes me cry with laughter — his neighbors screaming out the window: “SHUT. UP!!!”

      No way should that movie be that funny, but damn, it is:)

      You’re genius. Can I put: “If you can’t cane your wife, who can you cane?” on a t-shirt? Oh wait, maybe scratch that idea…

  4. Leigh Smith says

    April 26, 2014 at 6:00 am

    The cane is an evil instrument and the humiliation of having an audience really amps up the scene.

    • Trent Evans says

      May 5, 2014 at 7:32 pm

      I agree, Leigh. The “forced” exhibitionism just amps everything up another notch (or ten).

  5. Jolynn Raymond says

    April 26, 2014 at 6:49 am

    Ah, the wonderful things a cane can do. She will indeed feel it for a long time. I love how his friend is reacting to everything. We see his emotions as well as feeling hers.

    As for the extra +100 I can’t name the Eddie Murphy comedy bit. All I can think of is an 80’s or possibly even 70’s song that says “If loving you is wrong, I don’t want to be right.” She’s singing about her love for a married man or else she is married and loves another man. Possibly a country singer, possibly disco era. Do I get the points anyway 🙂

    • Trent Evans says

      May 5, 2014 at 7:40 pm

      Oh that’s close enough, Jolynn:) It’s Coming to America. You get points for pulling out the song reference too! I’d forgotten that song, but I have a (very dim) memory of it. I was born in the mid-70s, so disco and the subsequent urban cowboy period were (just barely) before my time. But I’m a music lover, so I remember a lot of songs that are as old — or older — than I am!

      Thanks for the kind words on Kiehl’s feelings. I’m trying to make that seem real. I love throwing protagonists who think they’re vanilla into situations where they might question just how vanilla they really are:) Can be an idea fraught with dangers in real life, of course, but it’s a hot idea in fiction.

  6. rogue says

    April 26, 2014 at 8:43 pm

    Coming to America.

    Although his Beverly Hills Cop, “banana in the tail pipe” always had me laughing, I’m now curious to see what Sheri would do that in her banana guys series.

    But I, too, digress.

    (Stretching to full 5’4″ height. ) When, Teaser — I mean, Trentster — I mean, TRENT, SIR — will this book be finished? One can hardly wait… 😉

    • Trent Evans says

      May 5, 2014 at 7:43 pm

      Rogue, I still remember the scene where he’s busting the other cops balls about his voice not being “manly” enough. Classic Eddie Murphy. and BHC was probably his best movie (and he had several great ones, IMO).

      As for when it’s done? (I loved that — Teaser:) I’m really not sure. It was supposed to be done months ago, but it’s given me fits, because I haven’t gotten the central them exactly the way I want it. The conflict is … complicated. I’ll definitely be doing a call for betas on this one, as I want to be sure I’ve got the tone right. So, the best answer I can give is: “soon.”

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