Ah, and now we come to Saturday, my favorite day of the week;) More from my upcoming full length novel, The Change, is on tap in this week’s installment. Once again, this was really tough keeping the excerpt at eight lines, but I did the best I could;)
Last week, Kiehl, traveling on a long business trip had determined that his wife, Kirsten, had failed to obey his order — namely to text him a picture of her naked body. She did obey him though … sort of. Kirsten knows her implacable, but loving, husband expects much more of her than sort of.
As the scene opens, Kiehl has just informed his crestfallen wife that she’ll just have to wait until he’s home before she gets her relief — after her punishment…
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He was so hard now he was almost groaning with it, laying a concealing section of the paper over his lap, just in case. It really could work, the psychological side of things. Getting into her head, bending her will to his; it held a unique appeal he’d never considered before. It was something he knew he wanted more of, even as he didn’t know why he wanted it, what particular need within him it satisfied. Or maybe that was simply too close to a brutal truth about him, a door to a part of his dark soul he hadn’t yet had the courage to open? He had his hand on the knob, and he was turning it — and it simply wasn’t yet time.
But he couldn’t be afraid of it forever.
He was curious about something though.
<If you don’t like this, then how come obeying my commands from thousands of miles makes your cunt drip?>
He wasn’t sure what she’d say — or what he hoped she’d say — but her response had him leaning back in his chair, stunned.
<It’s humiliating — as hell. But I like it. I didn’t know I liked it … until the first second I read your text this morning. How messed up am I, Kiehl?>
<In my book, that’s as far from messed up as you can get.>
Should he tell her? Really tell her?
Be careful here.
<Kirsten, it’s time to tell you something else. I LIKE that it’s hard for you to obey. I LIKE that it embarrasses you. How fucked up does that make me then?>
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I hope you liked this week’s teaser. I’ll be back at it next week:) Until then, please visit the other stops on this week’s hop. So many quality authors here, sharing their thoughts, week in and week out. Enjoy!
That was really… tender, Trent. Really really nice.
Thank you, Natasha! Trent’s not always mean Dom guy 🙂
Great interchange between the two of them. There is such honesty there.
Thank you for saying that, Cara. That’s what I was hoping for!
I think it’s soo sexy when a man admits that he likes the sass, the disobedience and the humiliation … what a great moment for them! My hat is off to you, Trent! 🙂
See, we do — so why not admit it, right? Thanks for visiting, Shelly;)
“It really could work, the psychological side of things.” Isn’t this what its all about even beyond the sex and the spanks. It’s the head game or what I commonly call the mind fuck. Great snippet, Trent!
mm, love the intimacy of their exchange.
Oh God that’s sexy. I love the mind games that evolve from power play and this demonstrates them so well. It’s exactly the same for me when I’m in submissive mode and you certainly struck a chord there. Wonderful snippet Mr Evans – thoroughly enjoyed!
Great exchange. This was a lovely snippet Trent. It’s so hard to admit your true feelings that first time, it may have been made easier with text messages though I’m thinking 🙂