This week I wanted to continue with the upcoming full length D/s novel The Change.
In this scene, Kirsten is having lunch with her best friend, Joely, and the conversation turns to what might happen with her marriage — and her sex life — now that she’s pregnant. What follows is a little portion of their conversation (my apologies in advance for having to go a little over the 8 sentence limit…)
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Kirsten frowned. She hoped, prayed Kiehl wouldn’t lose interest once she started showing. She knew she’d need him to show that he still desired her, still valued her. She knew it was stupid, going against all the feminist ideals drilled into her from an early age. But there was something inside her that needed it. If she was going to carry a man’s baby, she needed to know more than ever that her man loved her, still lusted after her.
Still, she wondered if a part of her might be afraid sex would endanger the baby. Especially with the recently added dimension to their relationship. They’d have to tackle that issue when they came to it.
Her phone buzzed in her purse, and she pulled it out. It was Kiehl.
<As soon as you set foot in this house, I’m going to fuck you. Just a warning.>
Her shaking hands fumbled her phone, and it bounced off her lap and down to the floor.
“Dammit,” she said, looking under the table.
God, please don’t let Joely see that.
“Did it fall over here?” Joely leaned to the side, scanning the floor.
“No — no, that’s OK. I’ve got it.”
Thankfully, she was able to retrieve the phone and slip it back into her purse.
Their food showed up and they both ate in silence for a few minutes. She thought of what Kiehl might be doing at that very moment, what he was thinking about. If he knew what she was thinking about, he’d probably track her down at the restaurant and drag her home like a caveman.
That would be great as long as there was hair pulling and spanking.
She giggled putting her hand to her mouth.
“What?” Joely said through a mouthful of food.
“Oh, sorry. Just thinking about something Kiehl said.”
Joely swallowed, and took a sip of her wine. “Like what?
“He just — he’s looking forward to seeing me.”
“Ahh, someone’s getting laid this afternoon.” Joely winked at her.
Kirsten could feel her cheeks warming.
“Don’t be embarrassed,” Joely said, pointing her fork at her. “I’m happy for you guys, really.”
“Thanks, Jo.”
“Let me ask you something though.” Joely pointed down at the book she had lent to Kirsten. “If that smut didn’t really do it for you, what does? How do you guys keep things hot?”
Kirsten felt her blush deepen. “I don’t know, Joely. Maybe this isn’t the right place–”
“Oh stop, Kirsten. Nobody’s going to hear. Just talk softly. I’ve got good ears.” Joely wiggled her eyebrows.
Kirsten took a drink from her water, licking her lips. “OK, so we have this — thing. It wasn’t anything we planned, we just kind of fell into it. But it’s been growing, getting more serious.”
“Oh this sounds good.”
“Well, we call it ‘The Game’. I know it sounds dumb.”
“What is it? New position every day? Do it in public? What?”
Kirsten cleared her throat, her voice lowering. “So, I stumbled onto this website one day…”
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I hope you enjoyed this week’s snippet. PLEASE visit all the other great entries in this week’s hop by clicking on the links below. Until next week!
Trent
Wow, I would love it if my husband sent me a text like that!
😉
Great job, Trent!
It’s amazing to me that most men don’t realize this! They really don’t. Thanks for reading:)
Guess she doesn’t need to wonder if he’s still lusting after her! Enjoyed the excerpt, though it was more than a little over the limit. You rule breaker you.
I know, I didn’t feel like I had a choice though. I’m rationalizing like a mo-fo right now…
I really like this guy. 🙂
That text he sent was smoking hot! This is the first snippet that I’m burning with more questions.
Okay, I do have one. When is the book coming out??!?
Aww thanks, Rogue:) Book should be out sometime around end of November, God willing.
Um, just realized I left out a word…
‘first snippet I’m NOT burning with more questions’ and that’s because you went ‘slightly’over your eight.
As a reader, I totally appreciate that!
But I am … me … and a slap on the wrist seems incredibly mild. 😉
Oh yes, I suspect Rogue would come up with something rather more … strict:)
That’s not “a little” over, Trent! 😀 But it’s a wonderful excerpt!
I know it. I’m probably going to be banned or something. But it was worth it, dammit!
That was a smoking hot excerpt, Trent! Loved the text he sent her!
Thanks, Maren. I wish more husbands/boyfriends would do stuff like this. It’s so simple, yet so powerful. Women want to know their men are thinking about them, lusting after them. For that matter, men want to know their women are lusting after them too!
Great excerpt….very hot! Guess she’ll be playing ‘The Game’ when she gets home. 🙂
Forecast shows 95% chance of Game playing in near future:). Glad you liked the excerpt, Sue.
I want to get a text like that too. 🙂 Oh the anticipation it builds until she gets home.
I’m thinking that her little chat with Joely is going to build a certain amount of anticipation as well.
Great snippet, Trent.
Methinks you’re on to my foreshadowing…
Thanks for reading, LA:)
Nothing quite like a hot text that makes you tremble with excitement but also nerves for fear someone else has seen it.
Nice job
Yes, that fear — probably sort of the same excitement/fear that fuels exhibitionism — is powerful indeed.
I shudder at the idea of a stranger reading some of my texts…
I love sexting texts between couples…just love. Great job Trent…and this site “She” found. Interesting.
Oh me too, Suzy. I think it’s hot and intimate all at once. And the reader gets to be the voyeur into their lives too. I think it’s a great device in fiction. Thanks for commenting:)
Enjoying what I’m seeing here.
Thank you, John!
Okay, Trent, you’re getting a smack on the wrist for going over this week. Not that we don’t enjoy your writing, we do, but we need to keep the excerpts down to a reasonable amount or I start getting nasty e-mails. And I really don’t like nasty e-mails. Loved your snippet, though.
OUCH! I know, I deserved it too. Thanks for going easy on me.
(Glad you liked the snippet;)
I get that – hoping to still be attractive when pregnant.I think all women must. I have a feeling in your hands, he’s going to find her hotter than hell.
🙂
Next week, the cane again??
If women knew just how many men found pregnancy attractive, they’d be stunned. I think a lot of men keep quiet about it because they’re afraid she might think he’s a creepy fetishist or something. Sure, some men (and women, too) don’t find it erotic at all, but if I had to guess, I’d say they’re in the distinct minority. Pregnancy is such an amazing thing, and depriving it of its erotic potential seems a waste to me.
I can think of few things more erotic than my woman pregnant with our child — it’s primal, and incredibly powerful. Plus, for a perv like me, her vulnerability — and the fact that she’s self-conscious about it — just amplifies the hotness. Yes, I know, I’m a sick f**k 🙂
Never fear, the cane does return.
I want to know about this website…
Oh you’ll learn about it:) Thanks for reading!
Very good snippet! Nothing like sexting from the husband, very hot.
Agreed, 100%:) What did we ever do before cell phones???
I enjoyed this snippet, Trent. Women do worry about still being attractive to their partner when they’re pregnant. The weight gain, the hormones running all over the place. Sounds to me like she has nothing to fret over. Nicely done!
If women only knew how many men found the woman’s pregnant body hot … they’d feel a lot better:) It’s beautiful, natural, and erotic. Thanks for reading!
Sexts are the bomb! loved it!
Me too, Renee. LOVE them. I can’t figure out why they aren’t used more often in fiction…
what a fun conversation! love it!