Hello Spankos,
Today, I’m continuing with a scene from the upcoming full-length D/s novel “The Change”.
Tom has just produced a cane. Kiehl is waiting, incredulous, knowing he’s about to watch Tom cane his own wife. I wonder what’s going to come of this situation…
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“You sure about this, Kiehl? I wouldn’t be able to stand it.” Tom’s grin was ear to ear, his dark eyes flashing.
“Yeah…I’m sure.” Kiehl wanted to touch her. He couldn’t lie to himself about it. He felt terrible for it, but he knew it was just a male’s reaction to the pleasing curves of naked female buttocks. A biological response. Humans differentiated themselves from other animals by being able to resist those biological urges. Barely.
The cane tapped across the fullest width of Sherri’s buttocks, and she grew still.
“Let’s say six to start off,” Tom said, his jaw set. “Then we can discuss what to do about your behavior.”
“Yes, Sir.” Her voice was a barely audible murmur from the other side of the couch.
The cane flicked in, surprising Kiehl with both the speed and the seeming gentleness with which the stroke was delivered. He’d never seen someone caned before, and wasn’t really sure what to expect.
The buttocks shivered, and there was a muted sound of protest from the cushions. A white line emblazoned itself across the summits of both sun-kissed cheeks, and Kiehl watched, fascinated, as it quickly filled with color, and swelled…
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I hope you liked this week’s installment! Hate to leave it there, but rules izz rulez 🙂
Before you go, please take some time to visit the other stops in this week’s hop. Lots of hot spankings waiting to be read. Enjoy!
More to come next week:)
Trent
My goodness, Mr. Evans, you wrote a picture.
Heh:) A depraved, twisted picture to be sure. Thanks, Maggie!
Just release the book already!! 🙂 It’s all so freaking hot!!
Gah! I know. It’s slowly, slowly coming along. Hit a snag when working on the conflict, but I think I’ve got it ironed out now. I hope so.
Gosh, I love the detail of the line appearing and changing colour. Very realistic
Thank you, Ashe:)
Excellent description of the first stroke.
Thanks, PK. I tried to get the imagery right. Good to know that it seems to be working.
Ah, I love my canes. So much sting with so little effort. I could surely picture her lovely bottom, unmarred and waiting, and then a rush of color in one single thin line. Beautifully written.
Your comment was beautifully written too! Loved it:)
OOOh, the cane. The absolute worst of the arsenal of spanking implements in my humble opinion. Rigid, firm and slim… but oh so painful in the right hands ~grin~ Another wonderful snippet, Trent 😉
Agree 100%. It’s pure evil … which makes it my favorite implement to write about!
Beautiful description!
Thanks, Renee!
Very interesting writing style. In this case the disassociation of the characters from the action– (thebuttocks shivered, a muted sound of protest from the cushions, a white line emblazoned itself — draws the reader’s focus closer to it. Nice scene.
Thank you for noting that, Cara. I was trying to convey the surreal feel of the situation from Kiehl’s point of view. It might throw some people off — or even seem somewhat cold — but I hoped it might work. Sounds like I might be on the right track. Great comment:)
Great excerpt! Think I’ll have to go back through your tag for this book to see the rest 😉 I love the idea of a woman being caned in front of her husband’s friend, so it’s great to be able to read it. Very hot indeed and excellently written.
I hope you don’t mind my asking, but how do you pronounce the name Kiehl? I’ve never heard of it before and in my head I’m saying it as “Kee-al”, but I’m not sure that’s correct…
Thanks, Athena! I think it’s a hot idea too:)
Your pronunciation guess was right on. That’s exactly how it’s pronounced:)