Hello, fellow spankos! I’ve been away for a while (my apologies), but I’m back this week with more from my upcoming full length novel, The Change. In this week’s snippet, the hero, Kiehl finds himself at a meeting — and thousands of miles away from his pregnant wife, Kirsten. Before he left though, he issued her … an order. That order — a picture of his wife displaying her naked body, sent to his phone via text message — has just been obeyed.
As the scene opens, Kiehl has the joy of noting that there’s a small problem with how she’s chosen to obey …
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He knew it was very early there, just after six in the morning, her time. He hoped she wasn’t worshiping the porcelain god again. Her morning sickness seemed to be totally unpredictable; she’d go almost a week with nary a symptom, then suddenly she’d be laid out, not even able to keep water down. She still insisted on toughing it out, and going to work on those days, but more than once she’d texted him from the bathroom at her office, insisting that this time, this time, she really was going to die.
But early or not, he intended to hold her accountable to him. It didn’t make any sense on its face; he’d simply issued an order for no other reason than he could. Crazy. But it made his cock just as hard as if he’d had her kneeling right there before him, her freshly spanked bottom spread upon her heels.
The pleasure of petty despotism.
<I did what you asked …> she replied.
<You were supposed to be naked, weren’t you?> He took a deep breath, his pulse pounding, loving every second of the anticipation.
<You can see everything!>
He could just imagine her face, her frown, her chin firm even as her lip trembled ever so slightly.
<You disobeyed me. I said naked, and I meant it.> He paused, thinking, wanting to get this just right. <We’ll talk about it when I get back. And we’ll come to an agreement on how you should be punished.>
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Oh … I hate having to stop it here, but next week we’ll pick up where this leaves off:)
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Great stuff as usual Trent. I too have been absent. I’m so looking forward to the insanity to be over and back with you, and all the other wonderful folks here. Maggie
Maggie, I’m very glad to see you’re back! Thanks for commenting:)
What did she leave on? Hurry up with this book, will you??? No pressure…
Um, I probably should have included more context in this week’s snippet. A better idea: I’ll finish the book…
Welcome back, Natasha:)
“…and I meant it.” Why do those words make me all squirmy? I love when I hear it or read it–so firm and in charge. I want this book done!”
Those are definitely intended to be squirm-worthy words when written — or spoken.
You have me curious as to how she is posed and what she is wearing.
I didn’t include enough set-up with this week’s clip (sorry about that). I’ll do better next week though:)
Great snippet! Hopefully, Kiehl goes easy on Kristen since she’s been so sick!
Oh, he’s gentle when he needs to be. But that doesn’t mean he’s always gentle. Much to Kirsten’s delight…
Welcome Back, Trent.
I have to chime in with Natasha … hurry up and release this!
I want to hear the discussion about her punishment ☺
Thanks, Melody! The book is coming along at a pace somewhere between glacial and tectonic…
As for the discussion about her punishment. Hmm, next week looks promising.
(I never congratulated you on the publication of Pleasure Bay. WTG!! Looks awesome:)
I think the term ‘always leave them wanting’ applies here. And I don’t think you’re sorry at all. Very nice
Methinks you understand me, Leigh:)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Such disobedience. Naked sounds delicious… get to it woman! AND she’s not taking care of herself properly. In my opinion she deserves a thoroughly good spanking which will teach her the error of her ways. Hopefully. Or… hopefully not.
Another tantalisingly short snippet. I wonder if we can get SatSpanks do a mega long excerpt one of these days… I NEED MORE.
HA! “I NEED MORE.” I swear I say the same thing after reading most of the entries on this hop. So much good stuff being written. Not least the smokin’ tales you’ve been cooking up in the ponygirl series you’re doing. I finished the first one — damn that was HOT.
(Congrats on sending Rough Rode to edits. It’s coming soon!!)
Release this book!! I want to read it, dammit!
I know, the book that’s been pending …. forever! Someday it really will be done. Perhaps that will occur before the Universe fully cools…
“Oh … I hate having to stop it here”, he says.
Anyone else hear the evil laughter in the background???
Oh, and Teaser — ahem, Trent, Sir — Renee’s inner domme is being awakened (the one she didn’t know she had). Might I suggest you publish quickly…or else. 😉
Rogue, you know me well:) GREAT to see you!!
Yeah, I noticed that too. Renee was putting off some Domme vibes there. Maybe it’s that new penname thing happening…
(BTW — congrats Renee on the new name:)
And Rogue? Don’t think I didn’t notice that little “Teaser” crack, young lady…
The pleasure of petty despotism – great phrase.
I’ll be back….