Hello Fellow Spankos,
This week I’m continuing with another snippet from the upcoming full-length D/s novel “The Change”.
In this week’s clip we continue with what happens when Kirsten comes home from work, to find her husband Kiehl waiting for her. It’s their regular night for what they call “The Game”, their mutual exploration of discipline, desire, fantasy, and kink…
Kiehl has just ordered his wife Kirsten to expose herself to his gaze, and reluctantly, she’s obeyed — partially. But now it’s time for the top …
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His jaw clenched, and his hazel eyes glittered. He was either pissed off or really turned on. She hoped it was some of both.
Dangerous, Kirsten.
“Now the top. I want to see those big tits of yours. Get them out.”
She almost said something at that, but bit it back. Her pussy burned like a furnace even as his terse arrogance raised her hackles.
Reaching back and unsnapping her bra, she held the cups to her chest. He shook his head at her, his expression darkening.
She swallowed. It was absurd to be embarrassed about it, but something about him ordering her to show them to him made her want to hide behind the couch like a frightened little girl. She took a deep breath before pulling the bra away. His eyes widened at the sight, his gaze not leaving her chest. She felt the gentle swaying of her heavy breasts as she folded the undergarment and laid it on top of her skirt.
“Stand up straight. Shoulders back.”
Pulling herself to her full height, her cheeks burned once more at having to present her breasts so blatantly to him.
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I hope you’ve enjoyed the snippet:) Please take the time to visit the other stops on this week’s hop. Until next week!
Trent
Another tasty appetizer from you Mr. Evans. 🙂 Making me very hungry!
Glad you enjoyed, Maggie:)
Once again, the format for Sat Spanks (too short!!) is pure murder, but I have to try to conform to it. GAH, the pain!!
Love this snippet. I really like the way you handle a woman’s body in all your books. It’s direct, it’s appreciative, it’s stern yet soft at the same time.
I’ll stop, otherwise your head swells to gigantic proportions…
Release date?
Yes, Kiehl does skirt the line between possessive and objectifying. Maybe he’s a little bit of both. And thanks for the kind words on how I handle a woman’s body. I believe it’s the way a lot of men think (including) this one, but I suspect many men are afraid to verbalize it quite the way I do…
As for release date, um, I’m basically a month late as it is; I’d originally planned on publishing this Nov. 30, but I had to push it back:/ At this point I’m not sure when it’s going to make it out. Sometime Q1 2014?
Lovely! Dark and enticing – which is exactly the way I like ’em. Great recommendation and if you don’t blog before… have a wonderful Christmas Mr Evans 😉
Really glad you liked it, Christina:)
Merry Christmas to you too!
Great job with the humiliation dynamic here, Trent. The hide behind the couch moment is wonderful.
Thanks, Emily:)
Oh goodness, I would have enjoyed it much more if you hadn’t stopped there!
Oh hell, I’d post a whole damned chapter for Saturday Spanks … but it would get my name up on the Board of Shame:)
Those humiliating moments can be quite erotic, especially being told to stand up straight when naked, the instinct is to fold up.
great snippet
jaye
Thanks, Jaye!
Hot excerpt, Trent!
Thank you, Sadey:) Glad you enjoyed!
Very well done, Trent. I empathize with her, and I wouldn’t take it well if hubby began barking orders like that at me, either. Game or no game. Interesting though that she bared her bottom half before the top, or was that at his request? Either way, I enjoyed it.
Thanks, Kathryn. Glad you liked it.
This is only the beginning of Kirsten’s journey though — likely to be much more than barked orders in her future…
yum. I’m so excited for this one!
Thanks, Renee. I can’t wait to publish this thing. Sooo close…