This week I’m continuing with more from my upcoming full length novel, The Change (which has a title change in the offing; stay tuned).
In this week’s snippet, the hero, Kiehl finds himself at a meeting — and thousands of miles away from his pregnant wife, Kirsten. Before he left though, he issued her … an order. That order — a picture of his wife displaying her naked body, sent to his phone via text message — has just been obeyed.
Kirsten followed orders … somewhat. Kiehl had the joy of noting that there was a small problem with how she’d chosen to obey, and as result, as the scene opens he’s just pronounced that a punishment is called for, and he’s awaiting her response …
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Her reply took two very long minutes to pop up on the screen.
<I don’t like this, Kiehl.>
<What don’t you like?>
<You’re not here. I want you here. I need you here with me.>
<But I can’t be there with you — so this is a way we work around that fact. Are you saying you don’t want to do this?>
Another long pause, each second ramping up his uncertainty. Maybe this was too much, too soon? Was this something that left her cold? He’d thought about that, but it didn’t seem to fit. She loved to be dominated physically — both her words and her body’s responses made that as plain as day. But perhaps this separation broke that spell. Could she play The Game from thousands of miles away? Would it be the same when he wasn’t there to enforce his demands?
Or maybe he just wasn’t up to the task.
Fucking pussy. Sac up and give her what she needs, Kiehl.
<I want to do … everything. You have no idea. But when you’re not right here, it makes it so much harder for me.> A pause. <I can’t believe I’m admitting this to you, but the idea that you can … control me. From across the country. It makes me wet.>
<I’m glad it makes you wet. That’s how I want you when I’m away. Wet and needy.>
<I am. Fuck, I soo am.>
<You’re going to have to endure, bad girl. When I come home, you’ll get your relief. After I punish you.>
<Yes, Sir:( >
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More to come next week!
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Natasha Knight says
“but the idea that you can … control me. From across the country. It makes me wet.”
That is hot!
Shelly Douglas says
She’s pregnant, wet and has to wait for him to come home from across the country to get relief? How MEAN are you, Mr. Evans? 😉
Maggie Carpenter says
Having endured a long-distance, D/s relationship (as so many others) I would never do it again, and this snippet relays the angst brilliantly. As always, Mr. Evans, your words on the screen say so much.
Megan Michaels says
OMG. That was so effing hot!! “Your going to have to endure, bad girl.” That line killed me. I want this book out now!! Having a husband who travels A LOT I can testify that it makes everything suck! Very nice, Trent!
Casey McKay says
Aww, I love that he worried it was too much for her. I think Kiehl is sweet! Which makes the fact that he is going to punish her all the more sexy 🙂
Melody Parks says
I love that he can control her even while being miles and miles away. I also enjoyed his rethinking about whether this was so much for her. A very caring Dom ♥.
Great snippet, Trent.
Normandie Alleman says
Sexting rocks, especially over long distances!
Cara Bristol says
Deprivation, domination–sexy little snippet.
susan arden says
HAWT! So so so damn hot! Well hell, dude, ya definitely got my attention. Officially, I’m considering this snippet as the find of the weekend. I think Arnold said it best, “I’LL BE BACK!”
Trent Evans says
I wish I could high-five you for working in an Ahnold quote. Glad you liked it, Susan:)
Constance Masters says
It’s funny how so few words can say so much. Very sexy snippet Trent , filled with desperation 🙂
Christina Mandara says
I’m with Shelly. The man is mean. Poor less is pregnant and hormonal LOL! But I like that he feels a teeny bit guilty at first, before his Dom side gears up to take the strain. A lovely and very realistic snippet 😉